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A Zoo Within the Sky (a rhyming alphabetamin)

A day ago as I walked along
Beside the winding stream,
Came something as astounding as a,
Dream within a dream.
Elephants roamed left and right,
Floating in the air,
Gallivanting ‘cross the skies,
High above my hair.
I blinked as quickly as I could
Just to rid them from my mind,
Knowing I couldn’t see what I saw
Lord knows they aren’t the floating kind.
My eyes did not deceive me, though
Not one small bit did they,
Once I opened my eyes again,
Pacaderms proceeded to play,
Queer as I thought that that was,
Really impossible I knew,
Something else caught my eyes,
Turtles in various shades of blue
Umbrellas stuck out over their heads, as they
Vaulted from tree to tree,
Waltzing around as they landed,
Xylophones playing merrily,
You fool, I told myself with dread,
Zoos don’t exist in the skies, I say.
...I shook my poor conflicted head, and then I walked away.

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Gosh, this was harder then it looked. =P

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  • ohhryaan
    October 15, 2007

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    WONDERFUL!!! Isimply love this write here!! ABC's I love it! LOL
    Thanx for sharing this creative piece!


  • Tear-Stained-Heart
    June 26, 2007
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    wow that's awsome! it all fitted in perfectly and had the important element of fun.


  • Ransomed-n-Redeemed
    June 19, 2007
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    Creative Implosion

    That was fun to read and flowed perfectly.
    Amazing job!

  • emotion-explosion
    June 19, 2007

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    wow. that was a bit like reading a mellower doctor seus book!!lol. u did a good job and it was very creative. good luck!