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Blindly in Love

Why am I so blind when everything is so clear,
So stupid when I know where I am steering?
And yet total unhappiness is ahead, I know,
But I can't get let go.
My love for him is so pure,
Yet so crazy that I cannot sure endure.
I cry for him,
Yet push him away on every limb.
I pull him back with full force,
But I love him, of course.
I'm so dizzy in this unstable world,
But I always stagger and see his curled
Lips wanting me back.
It's his loves I lack.
I'm afraid I lost it along the way,
I swear I had it the other day.
He's gone for good,
But I understood.
Yes I will still love him forever, I'm afraid.
It's how my heart was made.

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  • Phoenix-Flame
    August 18, 2007

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    hey! i'm kayleigh's fried. you're really good at writing poems. you should read some of mine sometime. anyway. !!!!!!!

  • glued-to
    June 19, 2007
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    I can really empathize to your words, and i'm sry. love really does suck, i'm not gonna lie. but you expressed it very well. I loved "i'm so dizzy in this unstable world" and "yes i will still love him forever, I'm afraid, Its how my heart was made" because in a way love does stick with us through our whole lives. good write.