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What I've Been Broken Down to:

It's not your fault one bit
It's just baggage from my past
I've learned to keep my guard up
And to believe nothing will last

But in spite of it all
I still have my dreams
I'm still dumb enough to hope
Though it's rarely as it seems

I still hope that someday
I'll find forever in strong arms
And should it ever happen
Hope I won't be scared off by his charms

But for now I will not trust
I'm too scared to take a chance
I don't wanna let anyone in
Can't give in to romance

I must not forget the way it ends
Must remember how I cried
Remember all the questions I'm left with
And how it makes me die inside

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monkey & pebbles
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  • Tweedle Dee
    August 1, 2008

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    Ahhh.

    God this was so sad... The poem itself was so right, your exactly right in it though. Romance does hurt, and often time's I regret getting into one and finding myself wishing I were out. Isn't it strange how that works??
    Once again, great write. Even though it appears to have been written more than a year ago!

    -DEEee.


  • drunknmindsobrheart
    June 19, 2007

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    wow this was amazing


    i really really liked it

    i loved the begining

    well loved the whole thing but i loved the begining the most !!!!!!