Heaven's tears tumble;
flow past empathetic sky
soothing starving ground
with the crop of her lament.
Author notes
This is my first quadraphor, so it may be a bit rough. It's rather rainy today, so I decided to use that for inspiration.
A contest entry
- Quadraphor Challenge III by sheltered.
525 points, ended June 20, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just say what you feel needs telling...or have one of those random whims to comment on something.
Comments
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Nice metaphor
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