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Melodious Rhythm

Soft sweet liquid notes rain down
chasing the weariness away
Cleansing the layers of stress
that accumulates throughout the day

Relaxing the knotted tension
that tightens around the soul
Gentle melodious rhythm healing
making one once again whole

Author notes

Prompt: Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life.

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    June 5

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    beautifully written. i myself don't hear the music, but your poetry does it well. thanks for sharing.


  • Celticmoon
    June 20, 2007

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    Jeannie,

    So glad to see you back in one of my contests again! Your words upon this page are literally music to the ears. I can completely and totally understand all you have penned upon this page and I could not agree with it more. Thank you for entering and good luck!



    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 19, 2007

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    JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!

    I agree whole-heartedly! I like to listen to the old music from the 70's, the music with slow music and soft sounds.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 19, 2007

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    Bueatiful this is...it's true..music can heal a lot..but sometimes it can cause a lot of tears too....it's just playing with your emotions I think..

    I loved this beat
    Good luck in the contest
    XXJeanette


  • dustookie2
    June 19, 2007

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    ah hun the best next way to go to sleep have some music playing where you can just drift into the sounds as you fade off into dreams Beautifully penned hun with that magic pen of yours A pleasure to read thank you.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 19, 2007
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    Very pretty penning, good thought and nice flow in this, I enjoyed its calming words. Love, C


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 18, 2007

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    Music does have a way with healing us.
    It brings us back to our normal selves.
    It's amazing what one song can do for you.
    It changes your mood and attitude through
    whatever it is that is happening to you.
    It's always great to run away and get lost
    in a beautiful song. Well done and good luck
    to you with this one my friend!




    Jeremy0826

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