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A Crow's Wish

There once was an aging crow,
Who wanted his feathers to grow.
He made a strange potion,
With butter and lotion,
Making his feathers like snow.

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Um...it just came to me. I have no idea why a crow, but that's what I got!

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  • Shining for You
    July 14, 2007
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    verygood

    Thanks for the entry in to my contest and good luck.


  • Swan song gold member
    July 1, 2007
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    Very good excellent rhyme and funny story


  • Peteskid gold member
    June 24, 2007

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    nice imagery and narration here in so few words so very well done.Best of luck to you in the contest...PK


  • Dirty and Broken
    June 21, 2007
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    this is silly, it makes me laugh