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Something More

If you wish to be something more
Create yourself
A new world and feelings known to you
And only you.

If you wish to be something more
Remake yourself
Into all that is misunderstood
And destroyed.

If you wish to be something more
Allow yourself
To become absorbed in all they hate
And fear.

If you wish to be something more
Surprise yourself
Do all you think you cannot do
Or won't.

Author notes

I was in the car. The computer was next to me. I picked it up and wrote this. I guess it's about the need, rather than the want, to be different. Hope you like!
Cj

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  • AllYoullNeverHave
    June 19, 2007

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    This is great sis! I don't know if you know this but being different is very important to me! I think that being different is the best thing in the world! So with my love for being different, I guess I love this poem!!! It's really good! I definintly agree with this. If you want to be different, you should just go for it! This is so me! And you too! Just more proof that we're meant to be sisters!!! Great job! Keep it up sis! Love ya lots!!!

    ♥♥Chelsea


  • Dlvvanzor
    June 19, 2007
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    Hm. This is very different than your other poems, but I like it quite a bit. As you said the need, rather than the want, to be different. Maybe I'll show this to my friend! Thanks sis! And may I say once again that it's a beautifully true poem.

    Love,
    -Dlvvanzor


  • Decorus Somnium
    June 19, 2007
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    Very good message hun I love it.
    Keep writing and God Bless