I have nobody
I stand alone.
No friends beside me,
I have no home.
No shoulder to cry on,
All tears to shed.
No one's beside me
to share this dread.
Not a person to turn to
When bad times get worse.
Here I'm a loner
my days are cursed.
Who cares about my feelings?
I guess no one at all...
I'll say my last words
As you watch me fall.
And I thought you were a good person
but I'm left in the dust.
I'm really suicidal now,
My death is a must.
Author notes
no i dont feel like this any more, except on occasions.. but i hope you like it, and i hope people can relate, not that i want them to relate, i'd rather people be happy.. okay now im just rambling...
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Wow this is really great write! I thoroughly enjoyed it! I can't wait to read your other entry.
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hey
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This piece is very well written and flows very well. The message is clear and seems to be from your heart and soul. I can relate to this even though that might not be a good thing. Great job keep it up.
Never give up
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you invited me to chat about this poem, but you weren't in the room.. you can try again, or not.. its whatever
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sorry i must have hit something that i didn't mean too.
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yea. very awesome poem
and i'll be your shoulder to cry on if u ever need to talk! xo
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Awesome poem! I used to feel like that all the time too but I'm better now. I like how it flows and how it is put together so well. But there is always someone there. You're not invisible or else I wouldn't be writing this comment! But you're very talented. You could put what you're feeling down and that alone is so incredible. You are truely talented!
~jen
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