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The Final Dance


 
Underneath nighttime shade
pale pearls glisten on necks,
and cling to delicate perspiration.
 
Beautiful ornaments glow
under the waning moon, 
crowns covered in a crust of jewels.
 
Tired bodies shift in unison,
turns made to forgotten beats.
Mystery of northern skies.
 
The young skip down old paths,
years turn into seconds,
seen through a spyglass. 
 
Doom viewed in the east,
night dips past the horizon,
quiet pushed under the earth.
 
The dance never halts,
spins under scorching sun,
over lands of barren ice
 
Queenly figures twirl
in forgotten waltzes. 
Brambles rip sore feet, 
the last dances danced,
the finale of life.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Image by Ninja2ASSN at deviantart.com

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    July 8, 2007

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    simply beautiful and seamless as far as using the word list goes

    thank you for entering and good luck

  • michichoeret
    July 5, 2007
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    luv the poem. hard to read due to colored background
  • Diatribes
    June 19, 2007

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    This piece gives me quite the lonely feeling.
    The image you weave amid your words is has an archaic melancholia to it that seems to want to pull at all the hearts strings until they snap, creating a dishormonic dirge to tell the story of all my metaphorical souls woes.... but I am a weird person.


  • theprodigalsister
    June 18, 2007

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    Another fantastic piece - Chilling, haunting. Word choice matches the image perfectly. Again I wish you best of luck in the contest. Oh, by the way - I totally bookmarked this piece
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