Oh God
we did this, we did that
we did everything to make this cosmos succumb
It was you there rescuing the life of this nature
time and time again
fixing the globe
performing as an albeit arc welder day and night
Oh God...
In a list
A contest entry
- Spiritual Inspiration #2 by Samplette.
450 points, ended June 20, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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I came back to read this again...I like this image of God as Creator and we, mere workmen, who, even with all of our machinations only leave a transient footprint, whereas He maintains the entire creation and renews it for us daily, even repairing what we destroy...You have a wonderful vision of Him, Prabhu, I am humbled by that vision so often...Peace to you, Rhonda
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this is a very beautiful piece. best luck in the contest and thank you very much for entering.
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Another silver trophy!....I am not surprised...only happy for you. Peace, Rhonda
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So much power in so few words. Very nicely done. Love it. Thank you for entering the contest. Great job.
Sam
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I always enjoy how you present God as being the driving force in all that happens in our lives, in all creation...how you point up our well-intentioned mistakes and wasted efforts("We did everything")...then show His mercy and eternal patience with us("It was you backside")...you are ever an uplifting read, my friend. Peace, Rhonda
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