Thoughts of death inside me
But I try not to care
Because I'm drifting
Somewhere far away
Where the days were brighter
And the nights were warmer.
(When we said our last goodbye)
But now summer is miles and miles away
(Just like you)
And I try to ease the pain,
To get used to this change.
A silent lullaby plays in the distance
While I stand there in the rain
Trying to ease my pain.
As the raindrops silently fall down
I look at the sky and seek for an angel
(Where are you?)
Deep in me I pray
To find you there, to make you mine again.
Your voice still haunts me in my weirdest dreams
Where are you my guardian angel?
Oh the silence kills
Dark is fading slowly.
Where are you angel of my life?
Would you watch over me
In my time of need.
Author notes
I chose option number 3.
I was inspired by the song "In my time of need" by Opeth.
Here's the link to the lyrics:
http://www.seeklyrics.com/lyrics/Opeth/In-My-Time-Of-Need.html
Hope you like it.
God Bless
A contest entry
- Just Another Contest You Won't Look At Or Are You Proving Me Wrong?!? by Xxthe angry gothxX.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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p.p
its beautiful
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I agree with the comment below mine fully. It was a very great piece of work, and very well written. Flows smoothly and the description was well thought out. I like it alot! Keep writing, God Bless!
-Chris
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i absolutly love this piece.it was great. and i liked how you did the little lines in the parenthases..but awesome job for real!
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awwe that was sad, very well writen poem.
Keep up the great work.
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aww sis
are u okay? This poem is so touching and beautiful and amazing write u did a gorgeous job with this poem way to go bravo bravo sis
Deep in me I pray
To find you there, to make you mine again.
Your voice still haunts me in my weirdest dreams
Where are you my guardian angel?
Oh the silence kills
Dark is fading slowly.
Where are you angel of my life?
Would you watch over me
In my time of need.
U written from the heart and deep from the soul well expressed and with full of words within your soul. I love this poem your writing is great and amazin sis. keep da ink flowin sis hugs to ya u need me I am here Babygirl
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Oh gosh...this was amazing. I didn't notice much of anything, exacept for the fact I was completly consumed in this poem. I felt like you could personally relate to this song. I thought that it was great. Good luck and thanks for entering.
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"I look at the sky and seek for an angel
(Where are you?)"
I loved this line.
You have amazing poetry hunnie <33
~Princess of Shadows~
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