You her her [stillettos] knock against your ceramic floor
and you
^^pop^^
a quick dose of x
to forget how your {killing} me again.
Love comes in the form of 50$ bills
as you pay her for the hallucinogin induced sex
that you have a craving for every night.
She takes off her [clothes] as another dose
>>dances<<
down your throat;
her fishnets rip beneath your -->fingers<--
&& you remember how I wanted to be with you
so you fxck her harder to forget my face.
Her >red< painted lips utter a moan
the walls ((spin)) as the meaningless sex comes to a close
and you hand her another bill to ease your guilt.
One more dose of .deciet.
>>swims<<
through your cracked lips
but that was {just a little} too much
and when I see you &&convulsing on the floor
I laugh.
You beg me to help you
S
U
R
V
I
V
E
but I grin and [whisper]
"Where is your 60 second slut when you need her?"
Author notes
I just wrote this right now, tell me what you think!
A contest entry
- -x-Whore-x- by xxRainbowDawnxx.
550 points, ended June 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Jealousy by Pete Greenslade.
450 points, ended June 23, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Feel... by KittieLyyn.
360 points, ended June 24, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I really like this, so tell me what you think!
Comments
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very good dp
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a powerful vindictive piece . very .good . but there are rather too many lines for the contest. keep your fingers crossed
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Oh yes, jealousy most definately WILL be the death of this guy and I'[m afraid I would agre with you the jealous person on that one. Ah well he should've thought about getting high and dry and taking someones sex for money, stupid asses men can be sometimes.
Whoops, why help out? -
I loved this poem,
Just calm down on punctuation girl!
This poem is so vindictive...
I love it!
Write more darling!
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