Standing on the corner
scantly clad.
In expose beneath her mini skirt,
hints of fuchsia wrapped
to smooth thighs,
become hurried thoughts
we both desire.
While she dangles me
a delicate forefinger,
moving to and fro.
Painted to perfect tight skin,
is a provocative smile.
After a short climb
to the fourth floor door,
a trail of clothes leads
to an unkempt bed.
As lewd cries wail
from the headboard banging
against our bedroom wall.
A verse of whimpers woo
with silence through the
midnight hours.
Lying in a pool of sweat
with our breaths, reprieve.
I say to her,
‘Ok honey;
‘Let’s go home now.’
‘I can’t wait,
to do this all over again
tomorrow.’
Writings of Malabu©2007
My Humor Stuff
Author notes
Want to spice up your relationship?
Play sleazy John,
meets a street walking hooker.
A contest entry
- Open House by Nicole Hanna.
2000 points, ended July 9, 2007, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cherokee's Jacked Up Poetry Contest by Cherokee.
450 points, ended September 24, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Okay... why is this freakin' contest getting so much more attention than my Riverboat contest?
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Ummm
you have a riverboat contest?
LOL 
what river? Love boat?
mississippi? did I spell that right?
Mal -
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I can have a riverboat contest...
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‘Ok honey;
‘Let’s go home now.’
‘I can’t wait,
to do this all over again
tomorrow.’
LOL. Okay, now this was a deliciously delightful morsel to consume on this nice sunday afternoon. Very cute and extremely well delivered. Thanks for the chuckle!
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pretty
darn good... visually stimulating, love the descriptions...
carnal - a sensory delight!
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Very nicely done Mal. Very tasteful yet seductive. Add a bit of humor and you got a surefire good read. Good luck in the contest...Scott
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LOL It's really not that exciting... but of course, I've only been told that. Of course. Ahem. I find playing zookeeper and lion much better. lmao Usually there are whips of some sort or another involved.
Ah, the good ol' days. lol
You definitely captured the intensity of the moment, but even more so, the FUN of it. You didn't try to play it up as some super metaphoric piece of poetry, and that's just damn refreshing to run across. -
excellent~
Oh Mally
I have to catch up on your poems....I have missed ya..
I need to call you soon........and we can chat..I loved this sweetie.....
Love you too Mr Hunk
Hugs n love
Your sis
Susan~~~
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wahooo mal you penned this with a humorous prose that made me giggle lol
very good job on this and with style lol this is what I like to read
...mm
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