The beach called my name
And waved goodbye, it's time now
For I am the tide
Withdrawing back to myself
A contest entry
- Quadraphor Challenge III by sheltered.
525 points, ended June 20, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice. I like the viewpoint you chose! Congratulations on the silver!
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Thank you
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hoho..very clever, congrats.
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thank you
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Nice metaphor
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Thank you for your comment and the silver.
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