Can you see?
The different between
You and I
That I am perfection
And silky tones
That I yearn for all
To see
That though
I may be
The undead
I still yearn
For the tender touch
Of silken skin
The warm feel
Of your breath
On my lips
To lay with you
Till the morning light
And make my unbeaten
Heart come back to life
For me too find the feelings within
For you to find the knowledge
And together make it through
Author notes
Option 3 view of a vampire
A contest entry
- Options 4 All - Only 1 Winner by zhaniswolf.
715 points, ended June 21, 2007, 7 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very good
but if my heart stops beating let it stop
love the papa -
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haha
i promise i will
but i dont have to like it
lol
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this is really sweet. it took a way different view of a vampire than i expected, but i like it. great job.
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Very vampiric.
I like the details.
Best of luck.
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