Across the rainbow
A river flows
Into a haven
That no one knows
And in this place
There is a song
For the singers
Who don't belong
There are no lies
There is no hate
The broken never
Disintegrate
Tattered and torn
Like angels' wings
Yet sunny and bright
Like April spring
I chide in whispers
I bathe in hope
I smile and laugh
I can cope
A candle burns
The sun will fall
The moon will rise
In a slow crawl
Across the rainbow
A river flows
Into a haven
That I now know
Author notes
Option 2: Pick a color.
The color I chose was rainbow which represents bliss, hope, and (gay) pride.
A contest entry
- Just Another Contest You Won't Look At Or Are You Proving Me Wrong?!? by Xxthe angry gothxX.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment if it's worth it.
Comments
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The rhyme in this is great and I love the title! Good luck and great job!!
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i loved it
I want your haven.
But I'm not gay...
can I get in on grounds of being a junkie?
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I like your view of a rainbow and the poem is pretty smooth, however I didn't understand how 'I chide in whispers' fitted in. Good luck with the contest.
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wow, yours is so better than mine :] great job.
good luck -
Gay or not, even though I am straight, this made me feel gay (happy). This is one of the most hopeful poems I have ever read, that hasnt managed to make me cry. I loved how you managed the paragraphing in the poem. In some sence I saw arcs of a rainbow. This was very bueatifully written. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow...I LOVE IT! It's so peaceful, beautifuly written and it gives a great feeling to the reader. Wonderful job! Wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Keep writing and God Bless
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