Fall apart
let the emotion
wash over you
in the way you never
meant to know
Just keep living
Turn away
don't let them see
the weakness
it presents itself to me
to be human
and my agony
in its apathy
like a caged tiger
pour over me
I just keep living
I'd have to say
I never realized
that all this time
I've been keeping all the life
that's raw and faded
In a love thats unafraid
so my agony
pours to the floor
to be washed away
a soggy mess
as a rain-forest
gathers all its possessions
on a long walk home
Please tell me what you think
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GRACIE I LOVE YOU!
i reread all my stuff some of its ok and i like it but most of it makes me cry with laughter! like honestly how emo was I!
see ya around and love the new poem. makes me wonder if your ok? im here for you. i wrote a poem about that too i mean it!
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Beautiful imagery!
These are my favorite lines. Very well done!!
Turn away
don't let them see
the weakness
it presents itself to me
to be human
and my agony
in its apathy
like a caged tiger
pour over me
I just keep living
I noticed you're a big Adam Sandler fan. I have most of his movies. The Wedding Singer is hilarious. The only ones that I don't have are 50 First Dates, Billy Madison, and Happy Gilmore, although I have seen them all. Mr. Deeds is my personal favorite.
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I personaly find it insane that there are people who aren't Adam Sandler fans. He's a classic comedian :] I'd say my fave is Little Nicky, though all his characters are, for lack of better phrasing, just so adorable!
Thanks for the comment
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I personaly find it insane that there are people who aren't Adam Sandler fans. He's a classic comedian :] I'd say my fave is Little Nicky, though all his characters are, for lack of better phrasing, just so adorable!
Thanks for the comment
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