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Lost at Sea

Lost you became
In a sea of substances
Wading in hellish waters
Drowning by your own choice

I reached out my hand as you fell
But you wouldn't grab it
When I threw out a line
You just let it drift away

Later you returned
Changed for the worst
Still lost at sea
And still sinking deeper

A part of you died
The part that was my father
I'll hold his memory close
But to you I say goodbye

Author notes

A (day late) Father's Day poem

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