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Falling

A grand canyon of sorts
opens before me
its mouth hungry for a new soul

I stand at its edge
looking inside, unsure and frightened
Yet drawn strangely in

A river flows at its base
tears from the lovers of all time
I feel one on my cheek now

I close my eyes, lean forward
I let my destiny take me
Into the future, the great unknown

Falling...
Falling...
Falling...

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