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Broken

It's hard for me to tell you whats going on inside.
Because it's my emotions I've always had to hide.
When asked why I cried,
I lied.
I was scared to tell you whats was really going on inside.
Because all this time I've had to hide.
With no one by my side.
To pick me up off the floor,
when I'm down.
No one to carry me to lift my spirits high.
Now I close my eyes and cry.
Praying that no one will see.
As I sit weak,and broken.
I want to tell you everything.
All of these feelings locked up so tightly inside.
Can I trust you?
Will you catch me when I fall?
How do I know you'll be there for me when I need you the most?
There is one thing,
and no the human eye can't see.
Deep inside,my heart.
Is a hole from were he broke my heart.
Will you be the one to put the pieces back together?
To hold me as I cry?
But to get to know me, you'll have to look inside.

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    June 19, 2007
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    I loved it so much. thanks for entering it in my contest!


  • XneverXgoodXenoughX
    June 19, 2007
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    wow i love this. ive been where youve been trust me. i just ♥ it


  • angel eyes 09
    June 18, 2007

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    omg i love this its so deep and i could relate to it cause of past experiences not knowing whether or not they can fix what was once broken is a very hard feeling to over come sometimes you just have to give in


  • theeUnknown
    June 18, 2007

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    Fantasica

    Wow, this is awesome. Amazing. You're afraid to tell him things about you because you're afraid how he will react. If he will look at you differently. How you're broken and you want him to be there for you and help you feel better. It is so wonderful this poem, I just love, love, love it. Because I can relate so well.