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**So Far Away **

So far away
Yet so near in thoughts
My heart feels the
hurt ,and pain of constant loneliness


Anger
Anguish
Feelings, of being unloved


Regrets of love
Regrets of pain
Regrets of trust
Regrets of 'you'

Still, you're so far away from within my soul
Yet, so close ~ to my heart
and yes, I still love you.


Betty Rickard
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June ,2007

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  • lindaburns
    August 15, 2007

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    heartfelt

    ** Surely we all visit Regretsville now and then. You express "Lost but still loved" very well.


  • buggles
    July 17, 2007
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    wonderful piece of poetry betty ,my hats off to you. Eddy


  • cayleyxox
    June 19, 2007

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    wow

    Betty this poem is very well written. it has so much emotion and the flow is very well done. you have amazing talent as always. great job and keep em commin


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    June 18, 2007

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    "Still, your so far away" "Your" will need to be changed to "you're".

    This is in ache I too have felt, and he need not even be physically gone for there to be that loneliness . . . sigh . . . Thanks so much for entering my contest!