One line is but a thought forced too shallow and to create a depth of the profound, one must create a depth inside themselves.
Author notes
In-depth writing only comes from the depths of the writer.
Cynn
A contest entry
- One Line Will Be Just Fine! by My Darkness.
450 points, ended June 22, 2007, 26 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Philosophical with a good 'tie' between the two
a depth inside .<-- did you mean to separate the two? Would it be themselves, a pronoun?
Contrats on the gold.
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Thank you for pointing that out! That was just a typo!
Thank you for the lovely comment!
Cynn
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great line
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true, although i was hoping someone else could write me hope, i totally understand what you are saying... perhaps i should stand on my own two feet... rise again.. thanks for the entry!
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wow i liked both the contest line and the one in notes too well done and good luck..you seem like a deep thinker like me
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Thank you. I live for deep thoughts! The more complicated the better!
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You yourself express an intellect far beyond what AP states such a young, precious age to be. The depth and ambiguity in this one line is so breath taking and you exhibit such intelligence and frankly creativity. Instead of penning one line to paint an image, you penned one line to leave an impression and thought upon the reader. The conclusion of this line is spectacular and seems quite motivational and hopeful.
I applaud you and I look forward to reading what you write.
I noticed you are new to this site, so welcome.
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Thank you. You praise me too much! I'm not but a poet in the shadows of all the greats before me!
-smiles- I'm new to this site, but not new to writing! Thank you for the warm welcome!
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