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An Erotic, Romantic Cruise (Part 5, story)

Dew was the first to wake up the following day. As usual, she got dressed and went to make breakfast for both of them. When she was done, she woke up Draco gently, and kissed his lips.
    “Morning babe,” he said, and yawned.
    “Morning handsome,” she said.
    Breakfast was eaten in bed that day. While Dew went to the bathroom, Draco put on his swim-suit and went outside on the deck. Dew came shortly after that in a new bikini that was turquoise in colour.
    “Another one” Draco laughed. “At least this one will not be eaten by those mean and naughty fish!”
    Dew laughed too. “This time, I have a something special for those man-eating fish!” She said with a smirk. She raised her arms and muttered something. Four sharks, and many little fish jumped from beneath them and landed far ahead.
    “Now, none will take a piece of you, but me!” she said.
 
  Draco took some sun-block and massaged it on Dew’s back, moving to her neck and to the visible part of her chest and between her breasts. Then, he took some more sun-block and massaged her stomach, and finally back to her face. When he was done, she did the same. While she was at it, someone who was watching them came out of the water.
    “Hello beautiful!”
    Both Dew and Draco turned and found a man with brown hair and grayish eyes looking at them from the water. Dew hid behind Draco, who eyed the person in the water.
    “Hot girl you have there mate!” he said.
    “Yes, I know and she is taken!” Draco replied coldly, not taking his eyes of him.
    “We can share!”
    But before Draco could respond to that, another one came up. He had greenish hair and black eyes.
    “Father will kill you when he knows that you have not only been seen by humans but also talked to them!” the green-haired one said.
    “Relax Max, one or both of them are magical folk. They kicked out all the sharks and the piranhas here!” He paused, “Didn’t I tell you that there is bound to be a beautiful babe, well there she is!” he said pointing at Dew.
    “Go away” she blurted out.
    “Yeah, she’s beautiful, now do as the lady says and let’s go!” the green-haired one persisted. He dived and apparently pulled the other one because he suddenly went down as if he were pulled. But it was not too many seconds before he came up again.
    “Come and swim with us” he said.
    “How do Mermaids mate?” Dew asked. The meaning was not directed to him but the question was.
    “Come here baby, and I’ll show you!”
    Draco’s face had become red and was boiling. Dew raised her hand and the merboy went flying in the direction of the fish.
    “I didn’t mean the question, in the way that it sounded.” She said.
    “I know what you meant, love.” He paused, “I wanted to go for a swim, but they will eat you if you swim like that,” he said pointing at her sexy bikini.
    She thought for a moment, then said “Do you trust me?”
    Draco nodded. So, she took his hand and wrapped his arms around her. “When I say go you take a deep breath. Ok. GO!” Draco took a deep breath and felt them both being lifted from the boat and landing the water. He felt some sort of magic at his legs but did not know what it was. When he opened his eyes, they were indeed in the water, but he was sinking and could not move his legs. He saw Dew coming down and pulling him up.
    “I can’t move my legs!” he cried out in horror.
    “Honey, look!” she raised her legs, but there weren’t any either, just a glittery silver tail fin! “Now, you try swimming, not like the legs but as if trying to move two legs together, with additional flexibility.”
    Draco was sinking again but finally managed to get himself up.
    “Dear, you can breathe underwater so long as you are not scared” she said.
    Draco followed what she said, till he was able to move and breathe underwater. He then took her in his arms and kissed her lips then moved to her. Then, suddenly he raised an eyebrow and asked “How do mermaids have sex?”
    Dew merely smiled.

    They dived below and found more merpeople. Dew held Draco’s hand, incase he had trouble and incase someone else decided to flirt with her. A mergirl came and luckily she was dressed, for Dew does not like Draco seeing other girls’ bare breasts, only hers. So, fortunately for the girls there, they were all dressed or simply wearing bras. The green-haired boy came again, gave them a weird look and left. The mergirl eyed Dew, till she made her uncomfortable.
    “What?!” Dew blurted out.
    “Nothing you are just beautiful!” the other answered.
    “Thank you” Dew said, not sure what else to say. And she moved along with Draco, who decided to hold her and be on top of her, like a fish on the back of another fish. While she explored and watched the different merpeople, Draco kissed her neck and shoulders. Every now and then, the others would look at them and occasionally point.
    “Are you the couple in the boat on the surface?” the mergirl who had commented on Dew’s beauty asked.
    “Yes” Dew answered.
    “You are very popular here.”
    “How so?” Dew asked.
    “Your voices while you mate are quite amazing and loud! Many fish have mated here before and after their seasons!”
    The couple blushed at that. Draco got off Dew’s back and went to get a shell he found on the ground. Meanwhile, the mergirl took that chance with Dew, who had just asked, “How do mermaids mate?”
    “Come with me and I’ll show you!” the girl said.
    “Why do you all say that? Don’t you have a straight forward answer?!” Dew said angrily, and turned away.
    The other one did not lose hope, and ran her fingers down Dews back. Then she moved and made their bodies collide. Dew had had enough! She pushed the girl away, grabbed Draco and swam for the surface as fast she could, none could swim in such speed. Out of the water they went and onto the boat with a thud. She waved her hand and the spell was over. They had their legs back and they were in their swimming suits.
    About five merpeople came to the surface that time, including the girl who was just hitting on Dew. Dew covered herself and her man with towels. Then, she got up and told them to go away. They did not budge.
    “There is always the old fashioned way, you know!” Dew said. The mermaids’ eyes all became wide and they dived into the water except the girl whose eyes would not leave Dew’s body.
    “You look pretty either way, and my offer of showing you how we mate is still open!” she said.
    Dew’s eyes narrowed and in a second the mergirl was over Dew’s shielded area and into the water. “Honestly, I don’t think mermaids can mate!”

    Draco took her into his arms and apparated them to the bathroom. Dew stood for a moment, then with a wave of her hand, her wand appeared, another wave and the bath-tub became huge, the size of the whole bathroom. Another wave and it was Jacuzzi. She opened the water taps and put in some shower gel with the scent of berries.. It was a brilliant Jacuzzi bubble bath!
    While the water filled, Dew brought her cassette and put in some songs. The first had a nice rhythm and Draco was stunned by its lyrics, which said “master and servant”! Draco knew what to do. Dew motioned him to the bed where he took off his swim-suit and got on his knees after the song said “You treat me like a dog
Get me down on my knees”.
    Dew nodded, and took off the lower half of her suit. Then, she moved to him and stood right on top of him. He struck his head between her legs and licked her pussy. While he did that, he felt her shake her hips with the song.  Then, the song said: “With you on top and me underneath” so he moved to the bed and lied down and she rode him, moving backwards and forwards while his penis made love to her pussy. She put her hands behind her hair and back for a couple of seconds and her swim-suit top dropped on Draco’s stomach. Suddenly, Dew got up to Draco’s dissatisfaction. She stood next to him and told him to get on all fours. He did as he was told and she began spanking, then he noticed the song saying: “Domination's the name of the game”. Her spanks got harder and he was ordered not to release his juice. Then, she flipped him over and stroked his penis gently at first but she got a bit more rough. Bending over, she licked his nipples, and he can only feel this and feel her hard nipples against his body. The song ended and she let go of him.

    She went to the bathroom, where the tub had filled and the whole place smelled yummy! The other song began: “Step inside, walk this way
You and me babe, Hey, hey!”  So, Draco entered, and Dew followed, they both entered the bath-tub and Dew stood under the falling water, Draco listened to the song to know what to do next. He heard: “Pour some sugar on me
Ooh, in the name of love
Pour some sugar on me
C'mon fire me up
Pour your sugar on me
Oh, I can't get enough”
    So, he instantly took some of the liquid soap and poured over Dew and began rubbing it on her smooth naked body. She got out from under the water and stood in front of him. He continued to massage the soap on her body and it glistened. Her body now slippery was fun and Draco easily ran his hand from her shoulders, down her perky breasts and hard nipples, to her belly to her thighs and to her feet, and all the way up!
    Dew sang along with the song “I'm hot, sticky sweet,
From my head to my feet yeah”.
    “Yeah you are baby, yes you are!” Draco said.
    Dew turned around and he rubbed more soap on her back and her ass. Dew got on all four and Draco instantly entered her ass. He rocked her, taking himself out of her then thrusting back in. he did this a couple of times more, then began to fondle her dangling breasts.
    “You just love slippery-soap boobies, don’t you?”
    “You bet I do, love” replied Draco. Then, it was Dew’s turn. She took the soap but she decided to start from her boy friend’s back. She massaged the soap and ran her hands up and down his body. She stood up, kissed his lips – which were the only area that was soap free – and ran her hands down his shoulders, chest, stomach, penis, and finally down his legs. On her way up, she played with his penis fulfilling his need to be played with. Unable to hold himself, Draco ejaculated in her hands.
    “That is the slipperiest penis ever!” Dew exclaimed.
    “Sorry, I couldn’t hold it.”
    “That’s ok, but I won’t eat you..”
    “That’s fine by me, just keep playing, babe.”
    So, Dew continued to play. She took more soap and massaged it on Draco’s clean and dirty penis. The berry scent filled the whole bathroom again.
    “I wish this were juice, so I can take you! The smell is amazing! You have a nice-smelling cock Draco!”
    Draco laughed.
    Dew continued up his body once more, till she had to stand up to reach his shoulders. Then, they collided their soapy bodies together. Dancing to their own rhythm and moving against each other. Draco was too hard and slippery so he merely teased Dew by allowing his hard member to touch her ass and belly. Dew too, teased her man with her slippery nipples. The touched his back, while her pussy touched his ass. The couple moaned at the each other’s touches and teases.
    Then, they both stood under the water and washed the soap off each other’s bodies. Then, Draco led Dew to his room, with the small bed. Dew walked dripping water, then sat down without drying herself on Draco’s bed. He stood in front of her, dripping water as well. She took his penis into her mouth and indulged herself in the pleasure of sucking on it and licking every inch of it. It still smelled of berry and that made her eat him more. Suddenly, Draco cummed and Dew drank and drank down to the last drop!
    When she was done she took his saliva-covered member out of her mouth and lay on her back and opened her legs as wide as she could. Draco sat down on his knees and licked her hot wet pussy. His tongued played on the sides then stuck itself in the middle. She could feel his naughty tongue exploring every millimeter of her and then she felt his lips kissing and feeling around. She moaned and cummed like never before!
    When Draco was done, he quickly took his tongue out and stuck his penis in. And his tongue and lips went to her breasts. He devoured them! Draco flipped them over, so that she was on top and Draco was underneath. He took her breast out of his mouth and said “Master and servant.”
    Dew dangled her breasts over Draco’s face, who stuck his tongue out to lick whatever it can touch. Then she started singing: “Pour some sugar on me”
    So, Draco lay her on her back and instead of sugar, he poured some chocolate syrup on her breasts. Then, he bent over and licked it all.
    “Very yummy I must say, I should try all the flavours next time!” he said.

    They both got up and looked into each other’s eyes. Then almost instantly they fell into a passionate hug and a wet kiss with a lot of erotic and stimulating sounds!
    When they finally let go of each other, Draco went in to the kitchen and followed him. “I’m starving” said Draco.
    “What would you like to eat?”
    “YOU!”
    “Me, it is then!” said Dew.
    She got out a plate and put it on the table. Draco did not quiet understand but sat in front of his plate. Dew set her ass over the plate and opened her legs wide, and said “Bon Appetite” Draco put his whole mouth into her and feasted on her pussy. She cummed and cummed but Draco never stopped, till eventually the muscles in his tongue were too tired to lick on. He took his tongue out and Dew said that it was her turn. So, Draco sat on the plate and Dew on the chair. She held his penis in her hand for a bit.
    “Suck it!”
    And so she did. She sucked, licked, bit, devoured, and did everything her mouth and his penis allowed her to, till she was done and till Draco could cum no more! They went to the bed and fell asleep instantly, with their faces close to each other. Draco had one hand on a breast and the other between her legs, and Dew had one hand on his back and the other on his saliva-covered and slippery penis.

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  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    wowwwwww that was amazing and i love how you made the music fit in to this. again wow.

  • FallenAngel16
    July 6, 2007
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    I like it...now I'm curious about the other parts.


  • D-niecee
    July 6, 2007

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    this is good i enjoyed reading this very much thank you for sharing. I am goin to have to see if i can find the other parts.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 1, 2007

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    One helluva story line you got going here. I think I have to go find the first four parts! Interesting, that's all I got to say!

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    Storm


  • zilbermann silver member
    June 27, 2007
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    I like this one too!

    Editing:

    incase -> in case


  • Cherry Hades
    June 24, 2007

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    Hmmm...I am not sure if thise was all that arousing..It was sorta silly, in parts..I thought the ending was pretty good, though. Descriptive.
    Cheers.

  • AltruisticSociopath
    June 24, 2007

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    Definitely Kept my Interest

    Wow, magical people named Draco and mermaids and people sitting on plates and getting covered in berry body wash. ::GRINS:: Thank you for providing me with interesting reading material.


  • WinnerGenius
    June 20, 2007

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    Wonderful...!!!!!!

    It is such a good, creative, imaginative piece. Thanks for sending me the link dear. I got married last month... so you can understand the collective rainbow of erotic feelings that run through me when i read this. A perfect fantasy for newly weds! Good luck and God bless!


  • Nermin Nazim
    June 19, 2007

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    Babe it is really hot and naughty super naughty

    Girl that is awesome and very not erotic but so sexy, it is very cleverly written, i love the imagination you have of the mergirls and all, the magic as usual, the imagery and the climate you take us too, taking us under the sea in a totally new world full of colors and with such a vivid imagination and diaglogue. also we went into their bedroom and the bathroom and the kitchen and were with them in their intimate encounters, very creative and very very naughty and beautifully naughty. very well done girl! bravo


  • Patience15
    June 19, 2007

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    That was so erotic!! I loved it just like all the other one's you've written. I liked that mermaid question i would like to know that myself, well anyways i think this was amazing keep writng erotica you're great at it. Emily


  • less than a poet
    June 19, 2007

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    ok this is like too crazy lol too damnn hot and unfortunately a fantasy cz i dnt think that anyone can come like that lol , d story is gr8 truly but u still didnt tell us h do mermaids mate but that threw a kind of suspense into it
    waiing for part 6 i need it be4 i get married ya sha2iya lol


  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    June 19, 2007

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    Crazy hot!!!

    Well I read about 75% of it and stopped.... great great write!!!! But yah, great story, and hoping there will be a 6th, and I'll read the rest of this sometime!


  • yassmin
    June 19, 2007
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    mermaids wow,nicee writing


  • light insight silver member
    June 18, 2007

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    Steamy

    Damn, there was alot of foreplay of sorts leading up to big climax. I am exhausted just from reading this and can't imagine how spent I would be after living this. I would be willing to give it the ole college try. Nice job and good luck in the contest. Rhon


  • penman gold member
    June 18, 2007

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    Whoa

    Doesn't sound like the extra time did anything to diminish you talent for such steamy writes. As great as ever! Good luck in the contest.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 18, 2007

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    Whew! Awesome imagery and imagination. Very hot and steamy write. Thanks for sending this since I have been keeping up with this story. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    June 18, 2007

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    Holy HOTNESS! OK, I may have to read this all from the begining, however, the name Draco sounds familiar, so maybe I have read one of them before....?

    **Master Ktulu**


  • StarEyes
    June 18, 2007

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    HOPE YOU SERVE ICE WITH THIS ONE!!!!

    Hot damn girl!!! This is getting better and better!! I need a COLD SHOWER now!!! hehe. WOW!!!! You certainly know how to write erotic!!!!


    Can't wait to read the next one!

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