Desire for flight to a planet of Peace
Result of Urban angst?
Result of Urban blissful stupidity
in its desire to control completely.
Quest for philosophy
The Search for Truth?
All philosophy the "Rapture" seeks to destroy
as they conclude it is their right by written ploy,
scribed by unlearned men of greed with hatred in their hearts
for Mother Goddess and all life as they shred it apart.
Need to anchor life
To meaningful existence?
They find only misery in this life we have been given
by the loving essence of Mother Earth that we now live in.
Denying sacred pleasures to damn woman for herself
to murder, rape, pillage with no honor among themselves …
Burning forests while eliminating entire species from this planet;
opposition to destruction silenced by their holy cross amulet.
Their existence has no purpose but to cause the Armageddon,
stealing all life force from humanity and claim they are forgiven.
This is what the "Rapture" believes, sees and brings to being
those who are gathering Blue as Keltoi strike upon the string
of the Sacred Harp with the Maidens Nine in rhyming Wyrd
to battle their madness in magick and mundanely purge ...
The asylum that is their mind and their own un-doing
as ego, id and sanity unplug and set to brewing,
horrific agony for those immortal in eternity,
degradation to natural laws of serendipity.
Aye, Keltoi Warriors, we will stand long and tall
to stop this abomination before the end of all.
Questions will be answered as they are set forth,
so as not to confuse the inhibited to the north.
Write On! Love On! Honor and Protect
with our life and last breath adept;
our Mother Goddess and our Mother Earth
as the New Beginning begins Her birth ...
If it is what we need to bring
as the Keltoi of truth sing,
Manifest the Power of Three!
So I Will It! So Mote It Be!
In Unconditional Love
and Complete Forgiveness,
as well the Light with every
Shade and Hue of the Color Blue ...
Author notes
Wyrd and Magick are spelled as such due to the fact that in the way they are used; that is how they are spelled. Magick is deep earth magick, not a parlor trick, and Wyrd is from the sacred scrolls of the Keltoi Warrior, not just words on a page.
(Keltoi is ancient Greek for Celtic)
A contest entry
- Innocense Versus Corruption by alexandrathegreat.
500 points, ended July 10, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - These Times by skaldkraft.
450 points, ended July 11, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Deep as the abyss!
I looked at it and knew one thing immediately. "Ears" will love this, in her style and is activism. You will do well with this. Congrats, DragonBlue for taking all the fun out of 'hell'.
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This poem is ultimately strong in verse and tone.
and calls out to our hearts to open wider and uplift
our spirits more genuinely and authentically....as we
were created to be.
to not be confined to what is considered...
"over festrictive religion." as if we are serving
once again the pharisee's of old...sometimes it sure feels like it!
This hell prompt has brought a lot of thought to poets, and interesting how each perceives it....are we victim
to it...helpless...or empowered to learn from it's
fire's....is it merely a metaphor that really filled
their ink...all questions we ask ourselves worldwide.
ears/Seattle
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Thank you
for replying to my work, and your empathic comprehension is refreshing to read, as most cannot concieve of themselves, let alone their church as wrong in what they uphold.
Love & Light~
)O(
DragonBlue
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Excellent
Great job on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest. Keep up the great writing.
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a good poem but about as controversial as mary whitehouse don't you think?
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This is a perfect depiction of corruption, Have to read it a couple times to fully take it all in, a breath of fresh air it is. THank you for entering this into my contest. What is the Keltoi, haven't heard of it before, enlighten me some more please. WHy blue, is it because it has a peaceful hue, makes one feel calm, color of water maybe? Anyway this is great though I am confused on some of this but I'm sure I will understand before lone, great piece.
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Excellent Sister! These words storm upon the page and demand their due. Truths written and brought forth in sacred verse for all to know whether they can accept it or not. Just Powerful! Blue
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this is really good... I like it a lot... you got talent. keep it up! Love this poem!
Crimson
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