He’s blonde and he’s one of the loudmouths
And “dattebayo” is what he always shouts
Her hair is the color of bubblegum
And the guy she loves is numb
His hair as black as the darkness
And he won’t seek his brother for forgiveness
He is a wild brunette
He love his dog which he will never forget
Her long hair is like midnight blue
With her eyes she can look through
He’s a mysterious guy with spiky hair
With his glasses and bugs he will always care
He’s lazy but smart and wears his hair like a pineapple
And to him, girls are nothing but trouble
Her long blonde hair is tied in a ponytail
And to “forehead” girl, she does not want to fail
A fat kid with swirled marks and auburn hair
When it comes to eating food, his life is fair
He’s in a bowl cut hairdo and has thick eyebrows
And his ‘cool’ teacher is what he looks up to the most
Her hair is brown and tied in two buns
When it comes to weapons, she’s never a dunce
He has a long silky brown hair and pearly white eyes
And he never goes back on family ties
Author notes
as a promise...
...one of my close friends and i were bored in school so we thought of writing a poem together about the hair and personality of the naruto characters, hehe
yeah, no need to critique. this poem is not meant to take it seriously, lol!!!
see you guys!
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A contest entry
- Favorite Anime Characters by ArtemisWolf.
330 points, ended December 9, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anime and Manga Characters by WoundedSoul.
350 points, ended March 3, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
do you know naruto? well, if it's true then comment please! ^_^
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Congrats on the gold and silver trophies! I have not really seen this show but I've heard of it... I love Death Note and Cowboy Bebop. My friend is currently trying to get me into this one now! I gotta say that Sasuke character breaks my heart! Little brat!!! Anyways... this was a great piece for the show! Well done love.
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This is a very enjoyable poem to read. I'm a Naruto nerd, so I really liked it! Thanks for writing!
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fuck this piece of sh*t i hope you burn in heaven
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Nice poem!!
I could identify everybody you were talking about!!!!!!!!
Still,it was a really good poem!!!Nice description about Sasuke!!!
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i think this is a good write. with all of the individual descriptions you both have submitted i think it would really top it off if you gave it a final paragraph at the end that says something about the whole group as a whole to bring the poem together, instead of leaving the write hanging without purpose. then send it to the company and see if you can get some praise off it or something. anyways, nice job.
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lol, thanks! i actually thought of your suggestion too when we were writing the poem. but we had a writer's block and just called it as a finish poem XD but i guess there's no harm to edit a last paragraph for this, ryt? anyway, tnx for commenting, again ^_^
wait, what company?
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