Stubborn and mean, its
Hateful evil eyes gleam, with
knocking it rider off
This half horse seems mean
In its stubbornly set ways, As
It lives out it's days.
A contest entry
- Over 250 Poems by zhaniswolf.
350 points, ended July 23, 2007, 42 entries
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Comments
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a mule is half horse/half donkey, just so you know. the last word in the second line should be "when" not "with". second word, third line; "it's" not "it"
cute poem.
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Half-horse? Hilarious. It is very interesting and one hundred percent true. Pretty cool.
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