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Day Dreaming

Day Dreaming in the
Day.

Day Dreaming in
School.

Day Dreaming about
Summer.

Day Dreaming in
Social Studies.

Hoping to get out of
school.

Not paying Attention to the
teacher.

Thinking about The Bell going off
for Summer Vacation.

Rinnnnnnnngggggg

Huh?

School Out!!!!

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  • omgosh!

    i love this... probably coz i can relate to this so well! i love daydreaming, and i do it rather often! lol, and as for school, thats a whole other world! >.< keep penning


  • Maryann22
    July 22

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    This was really cute. I know when I was still in school I felt the same way. I liked it, very cute, funny,and I could actually picture the bell going off and everyone running out of the classrooms ready to start their summer vactions.


  • Silverstar2.0
    April 21
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    I love it!

  • liduen
    March 27
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    I can soooo relate to this! Good job.

  • star girl
    August 15, 2007
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    i love this poem..keep up the good work sis.its so good. i just love the ending.

  • Judo
    July 23, 2007

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    This is a delightful poem, i would probaly be doing the same thing! here some litlle things: *mokney**smile*


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 5, 2007
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    This is really cute! I see you are day dreaming. Very nicely done.
  • carpenters
    July 3, 2007
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    this is NEAT

    This is the first poem I've read by you. I want to read more. You are a good writer.


  • pvenugopal silver member
    June 30, 2007
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    You have made day dreaming a celebration. I love your writing.


  • pop123
    June 23, 2007
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    i like ur poem.I have exactly the same feelings about school.i hate social studies.


  • Aralyn Leighanna
    June 19, 2007

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    This is very cute I loved its point.
    I find myself doing the same in school lol my teacher arnt exactly inlighning mostly they only talk for an hour and sit down!
    Thank you for sharing it was a delight to read!

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