The never ending wait,
For someone who I like,
Is There a dawn,
To this dark lonely night?
The dream of the silken grace,
that coy smile on her lips,
The amused expression,
That smouldering passion.
I always want to reach the sky,
Just beyond my reach,
Alluring me incessantly,
caressing my feelings.
Nothing to offer her,
I am but a shadow,
And shadows never speak,
Suffering forever,
The overwhelming guilt,
surrounds the love,
Is it love really?
Or just infatuation...
A thousand thoughts,
Playing in her mind.
The fire in her eyes,
Can reality be defied?
The love in her heart,
Can it melt the truth?
I hallucinate again,
In the garden of dreams,
The green wet grass,
two of us together.
looking at each other,
My trembling hand,
Trying to touch her face,
love that cares....
But the reality,
Harsh and cruel,
snatches her away,
To some unknown land.
Shadows only live,
Till the light is there,
Darkness that separates,
is everywhere now.
Distances defeat us,
Please unsee me weep,
We will never meet,
The dusk and the dawn.
But ensuing each other,
relentlessly,
for lives to come,
Never to meet,
But
Never to abandon hope...............
A contest entry
- love= Heartbreak by Hearts.That.Bleed.
375 points, ended July 1, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - let me know... by burning alive.
550 points, ended July 25, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Dedications by Blooming Poet.
440 points, ended January 3, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Break My Heart by Mistress Masquerade.
600 points, ended July 11, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Just how many woman do you have this effect on. Just kidding beautiful poem it made my heart melt.
Unsure why you did not win a gold in every contest you entered here, but thats just my personal opinion.
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Beautiful, laced with amazing imagery and strong longing emotions, thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck.
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I love this love poem
Very unique; comparing dusk and dawn. Thank you for entering.
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Very beautiful.. I really love reading your poetry...
Awesome job..
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I really can relate to the first stanza, I feel so lonley in the night for my boy. You crafted that feeling very well. Then in the second stanza you go to passion, how you express that is also amazing. I feel the passion flowing through each line. I understand sometimes it is hard to tell if it is love. I say if you've been with them for at least 6 months sometimes a year and still feel just as attracted as the day you met, it is probably love. Don't let distance defeat what you want. Go for what you want. great poem, thanks for sharing. Best of luck to you.
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awesome man. Great moral in there. Never abandon hope. awesome. Anyways, great write and good luck in the contest man.
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great write
the passion and sensuality from this piece really added to the theme. thank you for entering in my contest and goodluck
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Bravo
such an elegant piece...
Sensual and so full of passion...
Of course any lady would adore..Thank you so much for this beautiful entry..
Peace
~A~
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amazing write!!!! loved it
good luck in my contest and thanks a bunch for entering
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I'm here here I am waiting for you to come and rescue me
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this was good. Nice aout dusk and dawn. very interesting... i like this
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I agree. This is a total 360 from the words you spew for me! I love this, epsecially the last 2 stanzas. You provide a very vivid imagery in your hallucination. Beautiful and innocent. As always I love the way you write. Keep doing it.
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Amazing..so very beautiful.. thank you so much for this entry...I love the element of mystery with this write..
Peace
~A~
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