Like a white angel’s horse, soft and fair
My love is beautiful, his love is upright
I ride the winds of flora and blue radiance
Your loveliness swallows all the faintness
With the scent of fresh songs of splendor
My trust exceeds upon your love
Wherever you take my heart, I shall go
Fright gives plenty to the nearby seas
My love keeps me beyond the bottomless
He lands me by a tree of mangrove
So that I can live under and eat of his ripe love
That taste much finer then any fruit love
Laying my head upon his soft hair of spring
My heart is hallowed with him within
Life seems as if it’s so much in grace with him
Countless on all that grows beside us
Given to me my seraph's horse
My love is beautiful, his love is upright
He takes my heart above the heavens
lands me by a garden of love's plenty
In a list
A contest entry
- Anything Free Verse by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 5, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is great! Beautifully written! Which choice was it though?
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the first one the with the mermaid and the horse
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This was a good read
The flow was great (:
Thanks and good luck~
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Like this,
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Very Good
Given to me my seraph's horse
My love is beautiful, his love is upright
He takes my heart above the heavens
lands me by a garden of love's plenty
Lovely words in care
Have care the the metaphores don`t leave the reader behind
Very Nice
Rick
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That was hard yo', I never thought to write something like this. Where do you get your thoughts from? I mean your ideas, girl you is straight hard. This is excellent
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Beautiful write -- very well constructed
Lady Dragonwyck
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Written Beautifully
Beautiful,Flowing,A great piece of poem,I like how you use a seraph,and a horse in these poem!
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