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"Endlessly falling"

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Falling
  Endlessly falling,
        Reaching my slow hands out
    Embracing the drop,
            Smiling at the fleeting view
        Waiting for the quickest stop.


Remembered dreams in my head
    Contented failings
            What was said ?
        Entering now the blackened road
    Rushing faster shed the load
Fists are balled
      Stomach tight
    Oh not now, will i die of fright?
I see the bottom now flying up to me,
        Mouth so dry, need some tea.


                          What will happen when I'm dead ?
          Will i notice ?         
                        Oh my God she's still in bed....
                                  Falling....Falling
                                        Yes endlessly falling...



                  Close my eyes here it comes     
                                Time to die now, oh what fun ....




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  • Shapla
    June 22, 2007
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    Excellent title and beautiful background there.I just loved it.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 18, 2007
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    I
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  • FabApocalypse
    June 18, 2007

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    Vertigo...

    Dark indeed and with swirling ambivalence; in the poem you seem to both welcome and dread your landing to the same degree... reads as if written on the cusp between sleeping and waking. Between worlds...