Languishing among the drops,
moisture accumulates in every crevice,
deepening the moans of pleasure.
The sensation of friction against skin
heightens the senses, bringing me closer
to culmination.
Finally, satisfied,
I step from the shower.
©2007 rous
6-18-07
Author notes
Possibly the furthest from what you expected, or wanted. I just liked the opportunity to flex a little erotica muscle without the erotica. I am not quite sure that some get this. It is not at all what it sounds like. But then....
Elrénia
A contest entry
- crest my wave by patsoldcat.
700 points, ended June 20, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - No work required for this contest. Prewrites only. by yoopea.
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A critical comment is invited.
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I really didn't see the end coming from this, and I quite like poetry that brings a surprise when reading
thank you for the entry, I wish you all the best!
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Yes, I quite like the unexpected. I am glad you liked it.
Thank you for taking the time to comment.
rous
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Well I can honestly say it is hot in here
Very well done, short, strong and sensously done, but not at all tacky. A great piece.
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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This is not only sensual and erotic it is creative in the fact that it allows the mind to draw its own conclusion just as it should.
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Thank you. I try.
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final edit
to watch you shower and to see you use all the features of the shower head. and see your face at moment of release.
this is a really good write.
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fantastic thank you
this is great and luck -
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Thank you. Looking forward to seeing what kind of responses you get. I love a well written smutty piece, I just am not that good at writing them.
rous
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