Well here is a story, Of a little pill
that terminates your brain and makes you ill
It is called ekies , its a tablet thats small
after you have one, you still want more.
see the day you take it, you always trip out
start seeing things and your world you doubt.
the next hour it hits you, you turn like a robot
so drugged up, it is worse then pot
how i know is what you will probably think
it's because my dad did it and I watched him sink
Before he did it we had lots of fun
It all started, after he had the first one
He would walk around the house ducking and diving
He said something was chasing him, but the ekies were lying
And then he got violent because he needed his drug
I could sense his anger, when he gave me a hug
Then he would curse and curse till it hit the vein in his blood
Nothing would settle him not even my love
As we drifted apart, he became brain dead
His heart became cold full of lead
My father and i dont talk, and I had to move out
The screaming the abuse, every one he would shout.
He finally died from an overdose, his life at its end
Not one person with him, not one friend
he was alone without me his daughter his little girl.
left this place to try to go to a better world................
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wow this is so sad it actually made me cry i know how it fels to lose a parent to drugs...mine are both living but theyy were on drugs and they werent the same people when they didnt have it...we to this day are not as close as we were...anyways thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!!
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something truly makes me think that this is a pill i could do without
this was really expressive but so sad. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Ohh my goodness, this was so very sad. Bless your heart. This was an expressive and wonderful penning from your heart! I hope you pull a shiney from this!
~Tia
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Aww..
This is beautiful.
I love it.
And the rhyming is amazing throughout the whole poem.
Thank you for entering and good luck!! :] -
Is this true or is it from your imagination.....
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very cool idea.
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great write so true sorry to hear bout your dad
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Wow, I'm really sorry to hear about that. That is so sad. :'( That was a great poem. Thank you for sharing it and entering it in this contest! Good luck!
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