What has happened to you, Is what I want to know
Ever since High School you have let yourself go.
You use to be so innoncet never break a rule,
But thats all changed cause you are in high School
I remember when we were young, we would play in the sand
You would never cross the road, with out someone in your hand.
But now you are wagging class because of your new friends,
Because of this our friendship came to an end.
You started drinking, and and meeting up with boys.
At 16 you lost your viginity to the guys you they treated you as there toys
But thats not important, because I am worried about you
It seems to me lately you dont know what to do.
Your answer to everything, lies in a jim bean can
you say no one there for you but believe me I am
I dont care about the past, I want you to be okay
I hate to see you drugged out each and every day
So please let me help you and get your life back togeather
Because I am your true friend, and will be around forever....
A contest entry
- How To Save A Life by Faerie.Princess.
450 points, ended July 1, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ppl poems about friendship..... enter enter enter plz.......friends.......gesse...tiarna.......kaylie by tiarna.
450 points, ended July 12, 2007, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BFF - FRIENDS to the END! by x Star Dust x.
500 points, ended August 19, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friends..........Boy or Girls by tiarna.
425 points, ended August 26, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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YOU ARE A GREAT FRIEND WELL DONE
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WOW WOW WOW! You hit this in the truest meaning of what friendship is all about. Even when it seems like its over, your still there! NOW thats BFF! 
Excellent job! Thanks for entering my contest.
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thanxs for the write i hope we have friends like that.....
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this is beautiful and its great that you love your friend that much. high school changes every person who goes to it, some for the better, some for the worse. but eventually msot turn out ok, and so will your friend, because your there. beautiful, i loved this poem. good luck in the contest and keep writing
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great write and such friendship .... thankyou...
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