The hair of the dog that bit you
Your face as white as snow
Must have strength, you didn't die
Night was fun, full of ventures
Hope you find your hand made dentures
Who taught you this life of chaos
Turning tables, throwing punches
Downing hard core
Chased with moon shine
Finding fun in obliviation
Can't imagine living long
Great fun while it lasted
Author notes
Those were the days!!!
A contest entry
- 1000 points...One Winner by Cinnarry.
1000 points, ended July 1, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I enjoyed it so much
Don Your write is beautiful as the Picture so sweet. It brought great wit to the Poem.
Love (LISA)
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Thank you Lisa!! Happy you liked it! Also thanks for the inpiring comment and applause on this write. Couldn't resist the pic with the poem. HA! Don
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Oh My!!
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw now that little munchkin is the most adorable
too cute!!
Soooo tiny
Thank You for sharing this
Needed the lift...Weeeeeeeeeeeeeee~
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank you Desire!! The little guy grows on you HUH! I liked him from the day I found him! He seemed to be a great narrator for this poem! Ya Think! Love your comment and thanks for the applause!! I'm sure the little guy loves being in the center of the attention. HA! Your pal, Don
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Bad Sandy...bad Sandy! Ok...that is an ugly critter, no doubt about that! This was a fun contest you entered...might have to check that one out meself
...ha! As always you pen fun and entertainment for all of us, to raise spirits and deliver laughter. Wonderful work here and you delivered well ~tia
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I do my best given the hurry i've been in lately!! Entertaining you is my pleasure and so look forward to the giggles! Thanks for the gret comment and applause my dear Tia! Always look forward to your visits, Don
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Hehehe!!!
Good morning Don, Gee, is that your baby picvure? Now that is really a face only a mother could love
All kidding aside, your poem was great my friend. You must have been a bit of a rogue in then thar days. Thanks for sharing this with us, a pleasure to read. Sandy
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Thank you Sandy!! And yes I was a bit of a loner! I'm very happy you enjoyed my baby picture at the top of the poem!! LOL Good One!!! Your applause for this write is very much appreciated and so was the comment! You Pal, Don
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good
I really like it but it seems too final please dont write like that it makes me very sad -
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In life there are many sad things! If we did not know sad, how would we recognize happy! I love to write happy and love filled poems the most but once in a while a contest or some one needs to hear sad os I write it. Only in pursuit of happier days and more fun filled writes. I do appreciate your concern for the poem though and am happy that you did like it. In the future I will write happy ones and make a note if they are sad ones. Hope that helps my dear! Your friend, Don
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I'm surprised the pig wasn't flying.Are those little green men I see before you???????, Ros
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HA! HA! Thank you Ros!! I can remember some things that are slightly recalled as fun! Fortunately I'm still here and realized that it was fun while it lasted. I'm lucky it never lasted a real long time for my own sake. HA! Thanks my dear for the applause and the cute comment!! Your pal, Don
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Sounds like a reflective moment a memory of when you thought you could take on the world and win but you still do only way to go my friend I see many levels to this post with some deep thoughts to linger over. Thank you for the pleasure Good luck in the contest Love the pic....
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Thank you Mook!! Yes, those were the days! I think our inner nature stays with us even if we refine it over time. Our lifelong basics are what gives us strength and power to cope and deal with issues each day. The rest is cosmetics!! Thanks for the applause and the excellent comment my dear!! Your pal, Don
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Clever write my friend, lol love the pic for it. Good luck Love, C
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Thank you "C"!! I couldn't resit using my little buddy's pic fot the image of the motto. Cute ain't he??? Don
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