I always thought I'd like to fly,
But never quite this way.
I never thought I'd like to die,
Guess I don't get my way.
The world seemed such a scary place,
Way up at the top.
But now it all seems trivial,
Before the sudden stop.
Will my parent miss me
when they get the news?
Or will they even realize
Just what they had to lose?
My boyfriend wont even shed a tear
He doesn't even know
The pain that I've been going through
Cause I don't let it show.
I've found the world's a scary place
To try to walk alone
When every heart and every face
Seems cold and hard as stone
Everything was picked for me
Even life and love and friend.
Goodbye, good luck and miss me not
At least I chose my end
A contest entry
- Falling off a cliff by Cerulean Sunrise.
450 points, ended June 18, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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omg.. dude this is so so good!! You are like really good! You should get published... you really really should. Laters creepydude

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I like it.
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Good rhyming and flow, but so sad as the ending you show. A dark written poem that I hope is not a true account of your life. Makes for a great poem though.





