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Falling....

As the screaming wind,

howls the devil's laugh,

through my mind.

The face of reality

swallows my tongue,

gravity feeds its venom into my lungs.

 

falling...

into a downward twirl...

 

My lifeless limbs

sweep

a direction of nowhere,

as bone prepares for a carcass mash.

 

As control fights a trauma of shock,

the realistic battle of force

had never begun.

Another number, added to loss.

 

I am falling

into the hands of death,

a mass of nothing

racing the ground

for my last breath.

 

falling...

  falling...

 

silence...

 

Then nothing...

Only a slide-show

of a life gone by

days...

years...

a flash back rewinds to birth,

A halt in time awakes my present world.

 

falling...

  falling...

 

 

silence...

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  • Bazza
    June 18, 2007
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    Well done... what a way to go ... very well concieved and presented


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 18, 2007
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    Very well done.