An introduction to what ticks at the pen
To what shows all that goes on in my head
So many stories these poems of mine tell
Don't be surprised by this life of hell
I write about the pain I've been through
And whats left for them to do
I write about every person leaving my life
And one more holding and stabbing with the loveless knife
I write about suicide but in strangling ways
I write about what a price murder is to pay
I sit and doodle words of what love is
And how I've never had it, so it's not there to miss
I whisper prayers and share my pain
I write horrors and hurt to stay sane
My poetry shows the stuff that I hide with a smile
The agony that stays for more than just a "little"
while
An introduction to my world
A world to few I have ever sat and told
umm I'd love to hear all input
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it seems, darling daughter that pain has filled your life so much like mine. It is now that you overcome and drive yourself to have better and be better. I will always be here for you, and love you.
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Now I'm tearing up the love you got me!
I have had a lot of family issues...theres actually a poem that I kind of ventured into my parents and said a brief statement n how they hurt me...tragedy-seeming a life story...a small take of my life....
and umm Abondoned {F.o.R. s.I.n.S} was done when my father- who i use to love so much hurt me......
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seems genuine and sincere, ultimately hopeful and positive for the present and future...very well done...Best of luck to you in the judging...PK
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I enjoyed this poem but it could use some revisions. I think the lines could be shortened up to assist in the flow but other than that I enjoyed the message behind this piece of poetry and think it's great. Thanks for the great read though and I wish you the best in the contest you entered
Alex
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