An introduction to what ticks at the pen
To what shows all that goes on in my head
So many stories these poems of mine tell
Don't be surprised by this life of hell
I write about the pain I've been through
And whats left for them to do
I write about every person leaving my life
And one more holding and stabbing with the loveless knife
I write about suicide but in strangling ways
I write about what a price murder is to pay
I sit and doodle words of what love is
And how I've never had it, so it's not there to miss
I whisper prayers and share my pain
I write horrors and hurt to stay sane
My poetry shows the stuff that I hide with a smile
The agony that stays for more than just a "little"
while
An introduction to my world
A world to few I have ever sat and told
A contest entry
- Rounds Contest - Round 1 - An introduction ... by imgone.
450 points, ended June 21, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
umm I'd love to hear all input
Comments
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this is what i felt
though i m no expert. foremost i liked ur poem, the diff facets that a poet writes about . u give good amount of options in ur intro, and well presented .
just a note that in order to rhyme, some parts seemed out of sync with the flow .
yet the lines:
An introduction to what ticks at the pen
To what shows all that goes on in my head
..
are very catchy and well written.
do read my entry too.
cheers
balli.
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