All of a sudden these teardrops start, because he's the only one who can break my heart.
A contest entry
- One Line Will Be Just Fine! by My Darkness.
450 points, ended June 22, 2007, 26 entries
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It is always the one who can stop you from crying that makes you cry in the first place. It's always the one you want and need that you can't have... Sods law is very bitter on some of us on earth. Beautifully penned and very very true.
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hmm.. i see you've entered this in my previous contest.. cool.. i do like this one liner, it's sad but we have all been here.. thanks for entering and good luck
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that's ok, this is a great write! it isn't what i was looking for in the contest, but it really was worth reading! thank you for entering!
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isn't it funny how it seems that the only one that made you cry in the first place, is the only one that can make you stop crying. i'm impressed by the simplicity in which you got you message accross.
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wow lizzy, this is awsome!! Remindes me of 'tear drops on my guitar'!
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actually that was my inspiration....wow. lol.
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spendorific. I like one liners. simple and to the point. they can sometime hold more power in them than a book.
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oh, my.... this is great... hope your heart heals soon...
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ahh... i like it.. pretty catchy for a one liner! NICE!!! you are making me look bad now... you are writing all these poems... and i am not.. oh well...
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