Love is like a leaf coming, going, changing colors, and sometimes wilting with the seasons.
A contest entry
- One Line Will Be Just Fine! by My Darkness.
450 points, ended June 22, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
comment what you want it's just for kicks.
Comments
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wow.. that is so true! this is a great metaphor, although a bit cliche, it's definately inspiring! thanks for entering!
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Oh i knew it was quite cliche. It was just my first thought.
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Wow. You used a similie for love, and summed it up wonderfully in only one line. Great comparison. Wow. Fantastic piece.
Have a wonderful day and best of luck in the contest,
FallenPoeticAngel
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