Just remember ....
I'd rather have someone who tells me the truth,
on how they feel then to pacify me with lies.
For that person I call a friend!
Author notes
Inspired by Wolfie ~ Thanks my friend ~
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A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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That's exactly what friends are for. Well done. ~Pamela
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You r so right!! I would want you as a friend. My mother always told me when you tell one lie you have to tell another to cover up the first one. If you lie your not my friend.
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Agreed!
I really agree with this! You phrased your belief beautifully fellow poet. These were amazing lines. I love the third line. So much said in just four lines.
Fantastic!
--lonely shouts--
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wow thank you
I know I do concern myself with giving out any bad thoughts but I do want to do what is constructive to help. I am so glad you feel this way and I consider this a friendship bonding thank you
you wrote this one very nicely penned from your heart I believe - good write
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How true this is. You can tell a true friend because they will tell you when your work is crap or they won't let you leave the house because you look terrible and they'll tell you about it.
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Plain and simple, short and sweet! I love it. Nicely done and good job working with the promt. Excellent as always, Memaw. LOL (Isn't that what you wanted me to call you?)
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I couldn't agree more!Hit the nail on the head for me...it did
Rock on! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest
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