She’s losing it
But she welcomes the thought
I guess when it all comes down to it
Sanity can’t be brought.
So she’s hiding now
Tucked away underneath her sheets
Staying in the shadows of
Conversations she once saw as treats.
And she know most have good intentions
But for some reason it just seems better this way
Cause if you stop and think about it
Theres nothing they could say.
It doesn’t make things easier
And it sure doesn’t fix anything
It seems like she’s gonna break
From all the drama that life brings
And she wonders sometimes
What she did that was so wrong
And why it always seems
That she’s being drug along.
Cause every time she starts to walk
She’s always pushed back down
And all she asks for is a minute
For her world to stop spinning around.
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A contest entry
- ☻ Im Not Free ☻ ☺ Picture Inspiration ☺ by Sle3p.
365 points, ended June 19, 2007, 4 entries
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Since you did not put a picture in this since I last commented, I'm going to have to take you out of my judging process. Sorry!
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"Cause every time she starts to walk
She’s always pushed back down"
I really like those lines. This piece is really full of thoughts that I like and relate to.
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