Going stir crazy
In this supposed
Field of dreams
Summer nights
so.so sweet
Only in your dreams
Nothing to do
But drink this sweet necter
And forget yesterday
Cant help but think
Im falling like a star
That just couldnt make it
[in.the.heavens]
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I think that im slowly killing myself. This summer was supposed to be the best, and its working out against me, and im falling apart waiting to make another bad decision
Please tell me what you think
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liked it, made me think, and thats not something i do often.
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Well, im happy you liked it. and im glad it made you think (i think)
Thank you for the comment
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I love this poem! It's amazing as usual! I'm sorry you're not doing too well. I really hope your summer starts to get better. Keep writing, sometimes that's the only thing that can help!
[[Jessica]]
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You boost my confidence when you comment on my work. Im glad you think its amazing, now lets hope if i try and publish they'll think the same thing. Thanks for the advice
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well put
Nice work there seems to be alot of emotion wrapped up in that piece. i enjoyed it and hope to read more in the near future -
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Glad you liked it. And yeah there is a lot of emotion in here...to much, but it makes a great read.
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