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Poetically Free

Oh how my mouth doth salivate,
At the prospect of those points,
The greed within me I profess to hate,
Simply oozes from my joints.

Head swimming with prospects, I click,
But oh! Alas! My woes,
I end up looking rather thick,
As no hint, the next page shows.

See, usually a contest, when all is said and done,
Will give an idea of what they want to read,
So the writer has an idea of how that trophy's won,
But now it would appear I have been freed!

Oh the joy to have no bounds as such,
The ability to write things out from my head,
Without having rules to think of too much,
Where anyone will listen to anything that's said!

My heart is simply racing as I put my pen to page,
And prepare myself for a poetical fight,
Of mythical creatures, or coming to age,
But goshdarnit! I don't know what to write!

Author notes

Sods Law... 'nuff said!

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  • Lady Altheia gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    Well you can write whatever you wish for you are free to write it. I really like your style of writing. You have been hoodwinked by the poetic bandits.


  • Florida Sunshine
    August 2, 2007
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    ~ Hood ~ Winks~

    I've had moments like this! Very nice write I loved reading it!


  • W a s p
    June 18, 2007

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    Really good.

    I think this could be in your top five very easily, every verse a gem, no kidding it's got what it takes. Superb last line!! Good luck in the contest...ian.


    • Onionducks
      June 18, 2007
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      Thankyou!

      It's good to see you back again my friend! And once again you flatter me too much! Thankyou for taking the time!