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White Line Fever

You play life like charades
Where visions sleep and dreams parade
Imitation of reality
I can't believe all this civility
It's just a state of mind
And a long white line...

That's love supreme, a smoky dream
A coke and fries, with alibi's
So let me out before I fall in again

You ask so much of me
It's hard to live like you, a celebrity
You've had it all I believe that's true
You're a fashion show out of the blue
It's still a state of mind
Stretching out like a long white line...

That's love supreme, a smoky dream
A coke and fries, with alibi's
So let me out before I fall in again

Before I fall in again

This love supreme, this smoking gun
This avalanche, about to come
A raging storm of powder white
Threatening to cover us tonight
So let me out before I fall
Please let me out or not at all

That's love supreme, a smoky dream
A coke and fries, with alibi's
So let me out before I fall in again

And if I fall, then no-one wins...


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  • Onionducks
    June 17, 2007

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    Wow, powerful, rhythmic, flowing, more-ish... all in all a fantastic write... made me extremely tempted to put music to it! Best of luck in the contest!