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Debutante



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She's got the money,
The looks, the friends,
She's got the wardrobe
That never ends.

She's got the talent
That singing sensation,
She'll get them cheering
All through the nation.

She's got the boyfriend
That's just so hot,
She's got the things
No one else's got.

She's perfectly perfect
In every which way,
She's witty, she's pretty,
Junior high's jonbenet.

She's got each little thing
That a girl really wants
And I can't help but hate
That debutante.

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  • Faeryn
    August 13, 2007

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    reminds me of some particular not-nice girls from my school that I will hopefully never see again. back to your poem- its awesome. hmm, I think you should print it out, write a dedication, then stick on the girls back. oh revenge, how sweet!


  • Peteskid gold member
    June 17, 2007

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    funny, yes there are some things that are funny and the feeling that someone has all that , it is a funny thing. Very nice as a joke...PK


    *jonbenet i would rather see some other name this litttle girl was lost to us.


  • DeadlyTurnip
    June 17, 2007
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    He he he

    Is this about Darby too? If so, it really makes sense. Even if its not though, its very well written. I especially love the third stanza for personal reasons.


    • riasme
      June 17, 2007
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      actually it's about kate but darby's a close guess. i got the inspiration to write the poem from you tho thanks for the comment

      lise
      ps how many times are you on a day?? jw, because it's like you're always on


      • DeadlyTurnip
        June 17, 2007

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        Oh! Kate! That makes sense. I'm glad I inspire.

        It probably seems like im always on because im writing a lot lately and i try 2 post them all. i usually just stay on after that...sometimes i 4get 2 post the poem. lol

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