Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Gotta Keep Trying

Gone ... no one cared
The thing ... makes me scared
I find my own company makes me jumpy
So I returned ... being spurned
She went with me and stayed, you see
Left me there ... didn't care
Alone again ... chagrin

But, wait ... not too late
To dream of mate, so, that's my fate




Author notes

And ... so it goes

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • SEA angel gold member
    June 26, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Dreams often come true...

    And...so it goes... Time and times flowing in and out like the ocean. Sometimes peaceful and other times stormy. "And...so it goes" and flows.


  • tinygirl8
    June 17, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    nice piece

    hey like your background sounds like he didnt really care about this girl but he still is searching for his soulmate thats my take on it good job

  • heartdripsblack
    June 17, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    i liked this alot. ! saddened heart.