Impaired vision in condensed medium
Clustered thoughts in claustrophobic particle
Occasional tangents on differential surfaces
Captured moments in vertical space
Undetermined emotions
Unattained existence
Unborn
A contest entry
- Repel - Experimental Poetry by cvillelisa.
450 points, ended June 24, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lots of Options! by Abnormal.
550 points, ended January 17, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, this poem isn't like anything I've read before! Nicely phrased and interestingly scientific. Well done. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Unfortunately, I don't really get anything out of this poem, so I do feel that I should remove it from the contest. I'm sorry, but there are so many entries that I need to get it down to the ones that I really like.
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Scientific. A friend of mine was telling me just yesterday he thinks that in 100 years or sooner, poems will be written in integers. I dread the thought.
Thank you for entering a poem in my experimental contest!
Lisa -
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thanks for ur comments
apart than scientific meaning of some words, this piece can also be read considering the english lang meaning of those words.
yes i had read the integer part in some other comment of urs
this i feel is experimetal in the handling of subject, rather than using scientific words !!
cheers
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