Cinquain: A cinquain is a short, unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as follows: 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 in five lines.
It's hard,
I cannot love,
Or think to trust you, now
This isn't how I pictured it
So hard
Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}
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A really well-written piece
A lot of power within this piece. And it is very touching indeed, too. I think that the emotion comes across really well in this short piece. You have done good with this one. Well done.
All the best
Wayne
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Well done.
Awwww Very touching. It's hard to get a decent amount of emotion across with so few words. Ya did it gurl!
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aww, how sweet, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it.
-HD
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nice job! I really liked this piece! Ive written a cinquain before myself...anyway good job!
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Wow
Thank you for explaining what a Cinquain is.
I have seen this type of write, but didn't know.
I like it...kinda plain, simple, and to the point...per say.
Ephiphany
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