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Ornament

 Essence of ORnament

     essense of NAME

         essense of MENTality

 

All about ORder

All about   NAvigation

All about    MEasure

All about       iNTricacy

 

Where does it lead?  To the place where

Only

 Real

  Natural

   Ability

    Must

     Explore

      New

       Territories.

 

        

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 31, 2007

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    Where does it lead? To the place where

    Only

    Real

    Natural

    Ability

    Must

    Explore

    New

    Territories.



    great and wonderful things found here


  • opaqueangel
    July 26, 2007
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    Very good, very creative and original. Great job and good luck in the contest.


  • thelovesongwriter
    July 18, 2007
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    very unique form ,
    great write &good luck

    -lovesong


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 15, 2007

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    Cute little play on the word 'Ornament'. Almost like an acrostic and a poem within itself. Nicely written.


  • KittieLyyn
    July 15, 2007
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    wow very cool.


  • Swan song gold member
    July 8, 2007
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    excellent i will return to read again

  • Swan song gold member
    June 17, 2007

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    This is an experiemnt that worked very well. Excelent flow and easy to read the way you laid the poem out.
    Very good poem great content very good.

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